What do you think is wrong in the following passage from a

Last updated: 8/7/2022

What do you think is wrong in the following passage from a research paper? Bernard Shaw was a spell-binding orator. Gilbert K. Chesterton in his book on Bernard Shaw (1909) has said, "No one ever approximately equaled Bernard Shaw in the power of finding really fresh and personal arguments for these recent schemes and creeds. No one ever came within a mile of him in the knack of actually producing a new argument for a new philosophy. Shaw became the force of the Fabian Society that aimed at changing the English Society. Nothing wrong. The student has used appropriate citations. Blockquote should have been used. The research scholar does not show where the quote ends, and where his writings begin.