Read the body paragraph from Antonin s rhetorical analysis

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Read the body paragraph from Antonin s rhetorical analysis essay on Shirley Chisholm s presidential announcement speech At the beginning of her speech Chisholm uses parallel syntax to emphasize her claim that she is the ideal candidate She presents herself as a new kind of candidate who can bring an era of positivity to the US She says that Nixon failed to bring the courage the spirit the character and the words to lift us to bring out the best in us to rekindle in each of us our faith in the American dream Chisholm s stylized phrasing underscores the incredible opportunity that Nixon missed and that she can set right Which revision would most improve the body paragraph O providing clear connections between the thesis and Chisholm s syntax structure adding more transitions to describe how the ideas in the paragraph are related O using a clear topic sentence to connect the thesis of the elhjay to its purpose O including several more quotations that highlight the positivity in the speech