C Here is a sample by a 9th grader on the topic of a

Last updated: 10/24/2023

C Here is a sample by a 9th grader on the topic of a teenager s bedroom Read it Identify the topic sentence TS concrete detail CD and commentary CM Then give feedback on the lines below about whether this fits our requirements and is effective 1225 My room is a mess For example it smells like rotting pizza and there are clothes and trash scattered all over the floor When I walk in there I feel like I ve just entered a disaster area If they gave out an award for the messiest room I would surely win first prize Your opinion about April s sample