D Here is a sample by a 9th grader on the topic of teenage

Last updated: 10/24/2023

D Here is a sample by a 9th grader on the topic of teenage problems Read it Identify the topic sentence TS concrete detail CD and commentary CM Then give feedback on the lines below about whether this fits our requirements and is effective bet that somewhere if you were to look at the word teenager you would see it meant the person with the most problems Every morning I wake up at 5 30 6 00 and right away my problems begin my homework is nowhere to be found my socks don t match my sister locks herself in the bathroom to do whatever it is that she does and my mother is yelling Hurry up like a broken record So it s no wonder that I like to hurry to get dressed and out of the house sort of like an escaping fugitive to get to school and surprisingly enough more problems m Once at school I ve got to deal with my teacher about my homework not being wwww turned in or why am I talking or just lots of little stuff that gives us teenagers stress wrinkles and will later in our lives make us hags Your opinion