Question:

In an early essay draft, a student offers the following as

Last updated: 7/26/2022

In an early essay draft, a student offers the following as

In an early essay draft, a student offers the following as his thesis statement: McDonald's new ad campaign for its "Healthy Choices" menu features images of happy children because the restaurant chain is trying to draw attention away from its role in depleting the rainforest. Which of the following represents the most serious problem with the claim here? The claim doesn't address why analyzing the ad campaign matters. The claim doesn't address why readers should care about McDonald's new ad campaign. The claim doesn't offer proof that McDonald's is depleting the rainforest. The claim isn't logical; why would happy children draw attention away from McDonald's environmental role?