our college has just sent you a letter about campus safety

Last updated: 8/29/2023

our college has just sent you a letter about campus safety Is this letter effective for an audience of first year students To Whom It May Concern It is our fervent belief that the safety and security of all students should be held in highest priority for safeguard Thus we bring to your attention the upsurge in the unapproved imbibing of intoxicating beverages by students who have not yet achieved their majority Frivolity may allow for the venting of steam as it were but brazen and reckless consumption of intoxicants such as margaritas and Buds is a grievous danger to students well being and constitutions Therefore cease and desist all pre majority alcoholic refreshments under penalty of suspension from classes This letter is effective for its audience The elevated vocabulary will intimidate students into behaving better This letter is ineffective for its audience The tone is scolding and the word choice doesn t fit the audience This letter is effective Underage drinking is one of the biggest campus problems today the writer shows conviction and passion to emphasize this This letter is ineffective for its audience The administrators can t know who is drinking or not